Run Part I

Aug. 12th, 2010 09:31 pm
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Title: Run Part I
Author: hannah_chapter
Pairing: Belldom
Rating: PG
Summary: AU. LA, 1951. Dominic Howard is an average guy living an average life. Until a blue-eyed stranger jumps into his car and holds him at gunpoint...
Disclaimer: I don't own Muse, I just like to have fantasy orgies with them. And David Tennant. And Matt Smith. And Russell Howard.  And almost the entire male cast of True Blood. It's getting crowded in there.

Okay, so this is my attempt at a Hitchcock thriller, something like The 39 Steps or North By Northwest. Only, y'know, nowhere near as good.


"Drive." I stare, open-mouthed, at the man in the passenger seat. I've never seen him before in my life and yet he saw fit to jump into my car and demand a ride. This is ... well, I don't know what this is, but I don't have to stand for it. I finally find my voice.

"Look here, mister. You can't just jump into people's cars and expect them to drive you around. This isn't a cab! Just who in the hell do you think you are?"

Something hard and cold is shoved into my side and a pair of ice-blue eyes bore into mine. "I'm the man with a gun in his hand. Now do what I say." I tear my gaze away from his and see two men approaching the car. He sees them too: the gun digs even further into my side and his voice takes on a desperate edge. "I said drive!"

I do as he says and the men outside beat a hasty retreat, probably back to a car of their own. But we're already gone. My mysterious passenger relaxes a little. The gun is withdrawn and he throws his briefcase in the back seat. I clear my throat. What exactly are you supposed to say to someone who's just - and there's really no other way to put this - kidnapped you at gunpoint? "Where do you want to go?"

"It doesn't matter. Just keep driving."

"What's your name?"

"You don't need to know."

"I'm-"

"I don't want to know."

That pretty much kills the conversation right there. I'm trying to keep all my attention on the road, but I can't help myself, I keep sneaking glances at him. He's slightly smaller than me, and a lot thinner. Dark hair, a pale face and those beautiful blue eyes. Wait a minute. Did I just call a man beautiful? Get a hold of yourself, Howard! It's just temporary insanity, the pressure of the situation I've suddenly found myself in. Yeah. That's all it is.

He's staring at me, I can feel it and I find myself shifting in my seat as I drive. He obviously senses my discomfort. "Am I making you nervous?"

"Yes! You keep staring at me! I'm doing what you want, so why do you have to keep looking at me like that?"

He moves closer to me and a playful tone creeps into his voice. "Why shouldn't I look at you? You're an attractive man." I can feel myself blushing and I yelp as his finger flicks my earlobe. "A very attractive man." The finger trails down my neck. "I've always had a thing for blonds. We could have so much fun together. Get a hotel room, just the two of us, and really make a night of it. What do you say?"

"I'm engaged!"

"That wasn't a no."

I'm sweating now and he's still touching me. He pulls away suddenly. "Relax, I'm just having fun with you." I let out the breath I didn't even realise I was holding. He's not wearing a jacket and, out of the corner of my eye, I see red leaking through his shirt.

"You're hurt."

"What?" He looks down at himself. "So I am. I guess I didn't notice in all the excitement." He pulls his shirt open and inspects the damage. "It's nothing, just a little scratch. Got anything in here I could mop this up with?"

"There should be some clean rags in the glovebox."

He leans forward. "I'm trusting you. But if you try anything funny, I'll splatter your brains all over this nice car of yours and believe me, that shit never comes out. I don't want to hurt you, but I will if I have to. Understand?" I swallow thickly and nod. "Good boy." He opens the glovebox and paws through it until he finds the rags. He presses them against the wound and closes his shirt. "That's better."

"You should get a doctor to look at that. I could take you to a hospital."

"I appreciate the offer, but there's no need. I'll be fine. Pull over." I do as I'm told. "This'll do. Thanks for the ride. Sorry if I messed up your day, but I really didn't have a choice." He tugs at my jacket, which I took off and draped over my seat before I got in the car. "Can I borrow this?"

I nod and he pulls it on. "Be seeing you." He winks at me before jumping out of the car as quickly as he jumped in, leaving me speechless. What the hell just happened?"


Date: 2010-08-12 09:05 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] thekeyholder.livejournal.com
OOOh, what a great start!!! :D You slammed jam in the middle of the action!

But please tell me they'll meet again, right? When Matt said he likes blondes... he raised hope in me. :P

Can't wait the next part!

Date: 2010-08-13 07:51 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] hannah-chapter.livejournal.com
Thank you. Oh don't worry, they'll be meeting again. Matt just can't stay away from blondes...

Date: 2010-08-12 09:21 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] pat401.livejournal.com
Great start! I'm wondering how this will turn out.
Please update soon! :)

Date: 2010-08-13 07:56 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] hannah-chapter.livejournal.com
Thanks. I'll be trying to strike a balance between this and Shadows, trying to keep them both updated. I really meant to start this a couple of weeks ago but I got too wrapped up in other things.
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Date: 2010-08-13 07:59 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] hannah-chapter.livejournal.com
Is it the way the dialogue is arranged? I do worry about that myself, that it might be difficult to work out who's talking. I do have some bad writing habits - you could go through my other stuff and make a drinking game out of how much I overuse certain words. The last time I saw Muse, Matt clung to a railing with his knees and played one song face down, giving us all a really good look at the Bellamy buttocks. Certainly made my night...

Date: 2010-08-12 09:52 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] unomusette.livejournal.com
Haha, this was action packed AND made me giggle, therefore complete win - bring on lots and lots and lots more, please :)

Date: 2010-08-13 08:02 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] hannah-chapter.livejournal.com
Thanks. Oh, there'll be plenty more where that came from!

Date: 2010-08-13 02:19 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] herverylowness.livejournal.com
I love being slammed right into action like that. Reminds me a bit of Vertigo, though I know that's the wrong city and is a little later in the 50's.

Date: 2010-08-13 08:04 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] hannah-chapter.livejournal.com
I love Vertigo, but I don't want this to be as twisted as that. This is, I hope, going to be fast and light and nothing like my other angsty stuff (which even depresses me sometimes). Anyway, thanks for commenting, good to see people responding to it.

Date: 2010-08-13 03:20 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] starlight-myth.livejournal.com
NEW FIC!!!!
*jumps up and down*

Wow a Hitchcock thriller! That's my crack!
I love the Hitchcock movies and I've been wanting to write a fic based one one of them myself!

North by Northwest!!! Ooooo nice!!! I've seen it. Does Matt play Cary Grant?

You know how to start with a BANG! Matt flirting already....oh sexy and mysterious Matt!!

Need the next part fast!!!

Date: 2010-08-13 08:11 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] hannah-chapter.livejournal.com
I think North By Northwest is probably my favourite Hitchcock thriller, with The 39 Steps a close second (they do have almost the same plot). I more see Dom as Cary Grant, in the way his nice little life is about to be turned upside down, which would, I guess, make Matt Eva Marie Saint. Yeah, hopefully there'll be more sexy funtimes in this one, no angst. I'll probably update soon, but I want to get the third part of Shadows up first, so we'll see how it goes.

Date: 2010-08-13 07:12 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] elfyne.livejournal.com
Yaaaay new story of yours!

You had me at 'gun' in the summary.

Date: 2010-08-13 08:13 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] hannah-chapter.livejournal.com
Thank you. I really wanted to pull people in right away, so that's good to hear.

Date: 2010-08-13 12:57 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] fishofpwoper.livejournal.com
OooooooOOOOOoooOOOOOOOOOOOOOOooooooooooOOOOOO!

This looks so amazing. :D And it's amazingly well written and funny and exciting and I DEMAND MORE. :O

Date: 2010-08-13 06:12 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] hannah-chapter.livejournal.com
Thank you! You will definitely have more. I'm not sure when, but there will be lots more.

Date: 2010-08-13 01:44 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] altogingenting.livejournal.com
YAY! New fic from you *grins like an idiot*

Great start, I'm looking forward to more :D

Date: 2010-08-13 06:14 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] hannah-chapter.livejournal.com
Thanks. Yeah, I kind of need a break from my other stuff. At least now, if I'm blocked on one I can try the other.

Date: 2010-08-13 03:40 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] hyper-bliss.livejournal.com
What a great fic!!!

The beginning is just wooow, so full of action!!!

I loved this:

** "Where do you want to go?" "It doesn't matter. Just keep driving." "What's your name?" "You don't need to know." "I'm-" "I don't want to know." **

Matt is so rude... and sexy!! :P

update soon

Date: 2010-08-13 06:15 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] hannah-chapter.livejournal.com
Thank you. Yeah, Matt's going to be a cheeky boy in this one.

Date: 2010-08-13 05:03 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] darthtofu.livejournal.com
Your disclaimer is just so amusing. x)
I'm excited about this. Aaah! Currently I kinda have the same reaction as Dom: "What the hell just happened?"

Date: 2010-08-13 06:18 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] hannah-chapter.livejournal.com
Hah! Well, I know we have to have disclaimers, so why not have fun with them? It's also true! I'll soon be explaining everything, or trying to...

Date: 2010-08-15 10:52 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] millionstar.livejournal.com
Love this, can't wait for more!! :D

Date: 2010-08-16 08:18 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] hannah-chapter.livejournal.com
Thank you! Now I've got to make a plot to go with it! But I didn't exactly know what was going to happen in Temptation when I began and that worked out, kind of...
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Date: 2010-08-16 06:25 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] hannah-chapter.livejournal.com
Thank you! Yeah. you can't go wrong with an action-filled beginning. Now living up to it might be the hard part...

Date: 2010-09-02 08:19 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] farawisa.livejournal.com
did he just leave his purse on the backseat?

great start. wonder why i haven't found that earlier.

huh. off to read the second chapter now.

Date: 2010-09-03 08:39 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] hannah-chapter.livejournal.com
Thank you. Yes he did, and well-spotted!

Date: 2011-01-25 10:23 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] dolce-piccante.livejournal.com
wow this is so exciting!! :D and i love matt being all touchy with dom's ears. so hot ;)

*runs to next part*

Date: 2011-01-26 08:44 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] hannah-chapter.livejournal.com
Thank you, so glad you like.

Date: 2011-01-26 03:00 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] moz17.livejournal.com
Just starting to read this now. Cool set up, and I loved how Matt was being suggestive with Dom.

Date: 2011-01-26 06:27 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] hannah-chapter.livejournal.com
Thanks so much! I love writing flirty Matt.

Date: 2011-10-14 11:33 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] twimatt.livejournal.com
"And almost the entire male cast of True Blood."

Alexander Skarsgård... *drools* I´m sometimes amazed bu the hot guys my country can produce. I mean, Alex is just...just... perfect *sighs happily*

As for the story... Amazing! Gonna be intersting to see what happens next ;)

Date: 2011-10-14 02:47 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] hannah-chapter.livejournal.com
He certainly is. I'm on Team Eric!

Thanks, hope you enjoyed all of the story so far, I should be doing another chapter of this soon.

Date: 2011-10-14 09:00 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] twimatt.livejournal.com
I´ve now read all your stuff and it´s amazing all of it!! One thing i would be happy to see another chapter of is the um.. what´s it called again? Well, the one where Matthew has many lives at the same time! That one´s great!!

Date: 2011-10-14 11:18 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] hannah-chapter.livejournal.com
Thank you so much! *hugs* That one's called Same As It Ever Was, I will be writing some more of that one in the next few weeks.

Date: 2011-10-15 09:13 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] twimatt.livejournal.com
*hugs back*

That´s the name! :D Sorry, memory had an error last night ;)

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