"That's a long and involved tale and we really don't have time now. But I might tell you about it. In bed, after a night of love."
"Don't you ever stop?"
"I can't help myself. I told you, I've got a thing for blonds."
"Well, find another blond. You'll never get your hands on me."
"Never say never, Dominic. Something tells me that before all this is over, you'll be begging me to make love to you."
"You overestimate your attractiveness."
"You underestimate yours."
was so snappy and i adoredddd it. especially the way you write the dialogue. it reads very much like the 50s, but it's so sharp and fun. and the bolded bit = here's hoping!! hehe
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Date: 2011-01-25 11:05 pm (UTC)this:
"That's a long and involved tale and we really don't have time now. But I might tell you about it. In bed, after a night of love."
"Don't you ever stop?"
"I can't help myself. I told you, I've got a thing for blonds."
"Well, find another blond. You'll never get your hands on me."
"Never say never, Dominic. Something tells me that before all this is over, you'll be begging me to make love to you."
"You overestimate your attractiveness."
"You underestimate yours."
was so snappy and i adoredddd it. especially the way you write the dialogue. it reads very much like the 50s, but it's so sharp and fun. and the bolded bit = here's hoping!! hehe
i can't wait for more!